6月4日雅思大作文7分范文–优秀与合作,什么更重要-

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6月4日雅思大作文7分范文–优秀与合作,什么更重要-

6月4日雅思大作文考题中的两个对立观点是:学校应该培养学生什么?是让他们努力做得优秀,还是让他们学会合作共赢?这个作文题目是典型的新瓶装旧酒。以往见得多的提问方式是:学生到底该学竞争,还是合作?

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那么,如何解题?首先,该双边讨论还是选择一方?如果双边讨论,就要分别谈追求优秀和学会合作各自的好处和坏处,然后在最后一段表达自己的观点。如果你认为合作共赢比个体优秀更重要,那么你就得具体给出并分析2-3个理由。我们认为,选择双边讨论可能更合理,毕竟在教育中,这两种素质都很重要,同时也都有缺陷,两者需要互补。而且,这样写绝对不缺思想。比如,努力做到比别人优秀,就能给孩子们以学习动力,让他们学到更多的东西;但如果一味只求优秀,孩子们就会渐渐忘记要相互帮助。同时,孩子们学会合作共赢,就能在解决复杂问题时群策群力,解决一些个体无法解决的问题,但是过分强调合作共赢,会导致孩子们只学与自己相关的内容,从而失去对世界的整体把握。

一般来说,在“Do the advantages outweigh the
disadvantages”这类作文中,均需要讨论双方观点的利弊,然后给出自己的观点。

Task:

Many students are taught to push themselves to try and be better than other
students, rather than work together for everyone’s benefits. Do the advantages
outweigh the disadvantages?

很多学生被教育要努力学习,要超过其他同学,而不是一起学习,共同受益。这种训练学生变得有好胜心的方式是否缺点大于优点?

Sample answer:

Trying best to excel other students or learning to work together with others?
There is always some argument around this question. I think both have their
advantages and disadvantages.

Needless to say, becoming better than others often gives students strong
motivations to study hard so that they can become better and better themselves.
For instance, if a student is good at maths but not so good at chemistry, he
will try his utmost to catch up with chemistry, then he will become excellent at
both maths and chemistry. However, while pursuing excellence is a good thing, it
may also be harmful to the development of students. Often, in order to win over
others, many students may choose not to help their peer classmates.
Consequently, those best students are often the most isolated ones. Without
enough communication with other students, these top students do not know how to
get along with people around them and so when they go into job market where more
cooperation is needed, they are often at a loss what to do.

Working with others for mutual benefits is an important quality for students
to possess, especially when they are dealing with some complicated problems.
Just like in a basketball game, the team whose members are not the best
individually but know how to work together often defeats the team which has the
best players but they just play for themselves. This said, we cannot deny that
overemphasizing the importance of cooperation can also bring about negative
consequences. On a cooperative team, each member only has to do his part of the
work without having to learn anything else. This is, of course, very bad for
students because at their age, they need to gain a more comprehensive picture of
the world.

In my opinion, the desire to become the best and the ability to work with
others are both important for students. The motivation to be the top pushes them
to learn more and more in school and the skills of working with others prepares
them for their future work. Therefore, all schools across the country should
encourage their students to compete with their peers and at the same time let
them know how to work with others for the benefits of all memebers.

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